this is really good
but theres gonna be more, right? that isnt the end is it?
Reviews for "Valhalla Knights"
hmm, gratuitous PANTY SHOTS?
I got really confused watching this flash after reading a couple of the prior reviews.
First some wanker mentions hentai. Then someone is confused about the Dad. And then there's lots of "needs to be longer plz".....but I just watched a 4+ minute flash.....which is well long enough....which means you NEED TO FUCKING WAIT AFTER THE FIRST SET OF CREDITS, IMPATIENT FUCKS.
And another thing. Use your fucking brains for "background information." Flash artists don't need to force feed everything to you, that would be lame. If you must just make something up with that squishy mass that's atop your head. It's called imagination. My interpretation is that the heart this is the girl from the past that's seen fighting in the beginning, and now the cop is the next to protect her from the evil guy. This is just a generic past and present meet, possible love-awkwardness-adventure story. Just pay attention to the ACTUAL last seconds of the flash.
Anyways, was the gratuitous panty shots really necessary in the beginning? I mean, I know this is NewGrounds and everything where we demand sex and violence, but really. You can catch my interest with pretty good graphics and sound choice. =)
So in relation to that, I'd say take out the little half credits after the first part. We viewers of NG are obviously too thick and stupid and impatient to continue watching to the "nowadays" part.
You gotta lead us through it a little, while letting us think we did all the work.
-AnacondaHL
Great idea... but I want to know where it's going
Great plot idea here--or at least it appears to be. Some sharp diagloue.
Solid style. Has a really nice feel to it.
Develop the plot line more! Get to some action... Works more like a teaser than a story...
More action
The beginning part with the girl was the most entertaining part of the whole thing. You have the best bet of keeping people's interests if you keep the action going throughout the flash as much as possible.
Wow, the creator of Alien Report....
It really looked cool..The fighting was cool and it looks like it would be a good series..I really loved how you directed all the scenes..I also really like the style of the animation and the drawings..Good job...