WONDERFUL!!
An excellent beginning! I rarely review, but this is so well done I don't wish to pass it up.
Excellent symbolism, foreshadowing, and most of the other 'art critic' stuff. The transitions are classic. Even the humor with the chief was a nice touch! One thing I especially liked: giving some information to bring an understanding of the characters and situations, not so much nor in a way to slow the 'flow' for too long and bore us, yet barely enough to create curiousity and interest. (No, I'm not an English teacher!)
The sound quality, especially of voices, could be better, and SOMETIMES I see better clarity of drawing. Either one certainly would have brought a 10 -- which I almost rated anyway!
Best of luck; I hope your future endeavors are at least this professional, and that future chapters are in store!