Interesting
Good story. I have followed many of your submissions over the last year and you are very talented. I just read one bad review and felt that you should know that it is not horribble like that individual described it to be. In contrast with the last reviewer, this is the beginning of a story and you have to build up the story, that is what a first episode of anything does. I feel that you have achieved just this and I can only wait with anticipation as to where this is going. And the anime style, who cares?!?! You're better than I will ever be and I feel that it doesn't affect the story whatsoever. Good job and keep up the good work. I can't wait till the next one.