Excellent.
Good lord, the breasts on that woman...you certainly didn't mind taking some creative liberties, did you?
Anyway, you left this at a bitch of a cliff hanger but I can't say I didn't enjoy this. The graphics were quite good indeed, some of the animations really were excellent. Particularly the hands, for some reason. I'm hoping that if this will be a full series, it's out soon so I can get some closure....GOD I HATE CLIFFHANGERS.
Anyway I hope the "action" part of the action/drama rears its pretty little head in the series next iteration and you make the interest bump up a bit more, as this was a little soft and peaceful for quite a portion of it, but at least you kept the interest. Your art and skill with flash are really top-class and you'll do very well in the community, at the least.