Drowling!
Good job with the anime style, im going to follow the history, looks interesting.
Drowling!
Good job with the anime style, im going to follow the history, looks interesting.
CONTINUE!
Okay, well, first, I'd like to suggest some things...
1. When he was driving, it looked like he was driving backwards. I don't know why, it might've been the fact it looked like the railing was moving and not the car. If you plan on doing another driving scene, I suggest you change that.
2. The subtitles didn't quite match the way the script went. There were periods where there should've been commas and I didn't see a single '...' when Ken would start to trail off.
3. The voice acting was pretty dry. There was BARELY any emotion or attempt, if any. As hard as it is to animate and stuff, I really think you should try harder with the voices. Voice acting is like real acting. You have to make it sound convincing.
Well, those were my only problems with this flash. I can even ignore the fanservice scene (the one where the girl's clothes rip off, that kind of thing). ^_^ But I'm not gonna say it's perfect. It DOES need improvement. Please don't take offense. I hope the next one comes soon. )))LOVE SADA(((
cool
the graphics where great and the ending left me wating for what will happen next. i am wating for what is going to happen next.
DAAAAAaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAA
Hurry up and make the second one, don't lrsve us hangen'
I like
I like your style of animation, a little crude but very smooth. There is a lot of potential here and I look forward to more episodes. This could easily make my list of flash to look forward to.