I smell a saga
Nice it's got lots of work but into it and I have to say you can make a saga with this so try to do that and you could get good reviews all over the place I would like to see what happens next.
I have to point out that the sword is more of a paris type sword not a norsmen sword or whats it called. norsmens swords are bigger but thats all.
WORDS OF WISDOM: I would like to see what happens next you have some good work here I think you have what it take is me one of the best here.