I agree, lay off the breast exposure. Still...
This animation was great and had a good plot to it. Voice acting and lip syncing were more than decent and the pont isnt revealed in less than two minute ^^. My only advice really would be tone down a bit on the sex appeal (that is if you want to expand your hi quality animation to more audiences) and keep getting better ^^. A 10 in reviews and a 5 in ratings. Peace.