yoooooooooo son
sooo you got some F*CKIN AMAZING SKILL WITH YOUR FLASH ART oh my gosh its veryyyyyy fluid.....but honestly your story line was kinda cheesy like the whole part where shes making a ball of energy and she starts to cry hahahaha that was halarious sorry i couldnt take it seriously.....and i dont know if you did all the voices but it sounded like u did...i got a chuckle out of that too none the less u got a greattt skill work on your story lines a lil more and ur on your way buddy