Real good noir style anime
3 quick suggestion, guy:
1. I under stand the whole skip a frame thing to save time, but try not doing it so much with the fight sceens(make them more sharp and clean)
2. I agree with Nigee, shes not very valkarie like. Though I have to give you props for the realistic clothing movement, you werent one of those people who make the over starched drawlings. You kick some surious ass in the whole "Show them something but hide it all at the same time" style as far as her flipping and going angel.
3. One last thing. That didnt look like any amathist madalian ive ever seen?! But nice design. Seems to change size alot though, big in the hand, tiny in the photo. A little shotty.
In summary, you kick ass. However, clean up the fights a little. PPPLLLZZZ! =-(