Pretty good
This was a decent piece of flashwork, although I do not think it should be number 1. And yes, the accent of the main character was annoying. There were also some mispelled words - next time you might want to proofread your stuff before posting.
This CAN be better
there are several things that could've made this first ep better.
well first off in the intro yoou only see the villain towards the end even when he hits the girl! thats a bit lazy it would;ve made the story better if they fought a little more and actually talked. and then once it got to the end then the girl would think something like "I guees I have no choice" for instance and then do that last attack.
also you could've had more people ineract with Ken like they could be talking one minute and then some emergency comes and there is a BIG action scene andhe fails to help some people or something or gets blamed for making a mistake. (thats drama right there! ^^)
You see you got to do things that will get people hooked or they won't watch. thats the key to an anime series.
Then you can have Ken comes home all stressed out and asking himself what he could've done...then he asks his dad and you could do that scene with him remembering what his father gave him. then you could do the rest...
Maybe you need somebody to help you out with your scripts a bit...all anime artists have advisors... email me if you want me to proof your scripts thats something I'm good at.
you can get my email adress from my profile.
and just so you know i reallly like the story here it's very well thought out you just need a little extra work put into it. and adding a few extra clips aint a problem. email me if you accept my advising and spript proofing talents. ^^
10!
You get a 10! This flash was so well animated and preoduced was so much quality. You have a great story, nice fight scenes. You are awesome keep it up.
Incredible
This is excellent flash, some of the best I've ever seen. The only REAL problem with it is the main character's voice. This could just be the person who did it, but the accent was almost too heavy to understand. Other than that, the graphics were beautiful, the plot was deep, and the overall quaility is beyond description. It deserves to be continued. ^^
awsome
very awsome