Excellent
Great job, especially if all of this was done by yourself (I missed the credits so I dont know), but there are a few problems.
1. As others said before me, the file size is -way- too big for such a short part of what looks like a pretty long story.
2. When working by yourself on such a big project, it's extremely time consuming and will take a VERY long time to finish, by which time some flash authors lose interest in making it and move to something else.
So yeah, try to extend your second part a little longer and compress it more if possible; keep up the good work!