Outstanding effort, great work
I really enjoyed that, a lot of fun to watch. The opening and the theme music were spectacular. Keep up the outstanding work!
Outstanding effort, great work
I really enjoyed that, a lot of fun to watch. The opening and the theme music were spectacular. Keep up the outstanding work!
Nice but....
I would have given you all 10's if you did 1 thing, made it longer. Like ducktales3 you made a very good qaulity peice of work (a bit sketchy) but way to short.
very nice
i have seen alot of short films, series, ect. but this one is one of the best ive seen in a while. your really good and dont let anyone stop you or put you down in anyway. opions are like a$$holes they everyone has one and they all stink.
Very Impressive
I've watched your animation skills grow over your past submissions. This is by far the best yet. It is apparent that alot of time was taken on this project. Glad to see that it is a series, it holds a lot of potential. Keep up the good work.
good character animation, spotty artwork and sound
the character animation, especially in the intro sequence, was extremely well done. it's easy to tell you paid careful attention to detail with it...but the rest of the flash suffers from an obvious lack of attention. the backgrounds, especially with the textures in the intro, were pretty atrocious. the camera work was annoying, and the speaking was hard to hear over the "soft" background music. also, why did the main character have an accent when his father didn't? also, the sudden change of mood from the driving to being greeted at work to getting yelled at to remembering his father was a bit awkward.
you have a great deal of talent, but this flash feels very unmastered. a simple turning up of the sound for the voice (or turning down of the music), and more attention to background detail would really bring this to life.