Pretty good, but unbalanced
The graphics were amazing. I have to say though that you should clean up the graphics a little, or tone them down, as they tend to draw focus away from the main story. Everything else needs improvement. I have to say, you really should get a better story than just some cheezy anime ripoff. You also need to get better voice actors. For the amount of effort put into the graphics, this is probably the easy part (unless you're some paranoid shut-in doing all the voices yourself).
Aside from those few flaws, great flash.