cant wait
oh come on y cant u produce all in one go!!!!!!
cant wait
oh come on y cant u produce all in one go!!!!!!
Way to go!!
The beginning is very interesting! If you plan to make a series of this then I say go for it. It caught my attention, and left me wanting more. As for your main characters personality... I like it. He has some problems and is so far clueless to the mysterious cross and pendant. Keep up the good work. I look forward to seeing more of this series
NICE!!!
nice man love it
COOL
is original the history
Good
Interesting, I thought there could have been more character development overall, but you still did a nice job. The cross as a weapon is a nice touch, as is the necklace, because both could be used for any type of power or to save any person. Keep the enimies dark (it works well), and i reccomend having girl to help the main character (romance is lacking) but still good man :)
5/5
10/10