Nice one!
Wow, very good flash. But I write this review while it's currently number one on the portal, so I'm gonna be nit-picky as all get out.
First off, the visuals were very suave as usual. A good blend of frame by frame and tweening. Every character scene was shaded, kudos to you for that! My only complaints are that the characters every now and then look a little off proportionally. Also, there are some scenes (like when he get's home and takes a deep breath) where you tween the entire character. This doesn't look good.
The music selection fit perfectly and set the appropriate tone. The voice acting left a little to be desired. I don't know if the accent was on purpose or not, but it seemed out of place. Also, some of the dialog was a bit hard to pick up. This is something that was prevalent in your latest Zelda toon .
Story wise. . . I can't really say because not much happened. It was intriguing, but just that.
Alright, I'm done being a douch-bag, but someone's gotta keep checks and balances. :)
Feel free to rag on my flashes.