pretty good
The first scene i noticed you tried to sneak in like 20 boob and underwear shots. The story was good, it lacked originality, mostly the whole cop part (the boss is the same basic "angry boss" in every cop movie) It was good though, keep em comin.
loved it great character detail aswell as...
a great back drop storyline and you were careful not to mush it up. only one thing bothered me hes a cop did he steal that car???
Try harder
Fix those voices. I can barely hear them. And make it more interesting next time.
Crazy awesome
for all you bastards out there who thought ot sucked, your probably just jealous of Jerry's skillz. that was one of the best flashes ive ever seen and YOU MUST MAKE MORE!!!!
Mew....
I have nothing else to say. The score I gave kinda says it all...