that was good
the graffs were a bit shakey but what isnt???? and dont listen to LeadPipeProductions all he wants is hentai and fight scenes he has no feelings for anyone else. but the fightscene was pretty good and i cant wait till the second one comes out you left us on a very big cliff hanger!!
Stick to hot the babes
you realy should have stuck to the good part, the fight scene at the beginning was realy goood, but as soon as you tried sticking a sentimental story line in there it got almost unbarable you could have at least made the "main" cheracture a hot chick not some fugly dude. Stick to your strong points, fight scenes and hot chicks
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nice work
sweet work of art. loved the intro (some parts more than others hehe) keep up yhe good work ill be looking for the next chapter
Well done.
The anime/manga aesthetic worked well for this movie. Could have done with a bit fewer panty shots in the intro, but who cares?
Hope to see the next chapter soon,
Jim Hawking
PS: The exchange between Paterson (Peterson?) and Ken reminded me a lot of Burn-Up Excess. Sorry, I just have an odd mind.