You never cease to amaze
It was cool in the begining, can't wait for more like that. I know how hard it was to draw all that, so I commend you for it. The rest was good too, putting some peices of the story together for future stories. Some of the stuff was typical, like the "cop" thing, "my dad died and gave me something I don't understand" thing, but I would definently like to see more. Man this and The Real Legend Series, good luck man...good luck.