Very Conceptual, Needs Craft
I go to school for this sort of thing as well. I might put up some flash comps this summer...but I really liked the piece. It was very conceptual for the little things. We all encounter principals of design that are flawed everyday. You singled out one area and pulled the flaws and why. You expressed the interests of feedback and mapping quite well...which is why such the high interactivity score. I understand about the craft issues...because you're going to school to learn. I'm no Kyle Cooper or Michel Gondry myself. If you do this again once you get your chops up...it would be a great portfolio piece. Good Job