Remind Me Of Seinfeld Stand Up
I thought this was a funny little short. It was so observationable and very true to life. I like the aspect of the paper towel and how antique it has become. Also the dryers which dont really work at all. I think this could easily be a sketch for Jerry Seinfeld. I love this kind of humour
Accurace Is Key!
This movie was not only funny, but amazingly accurate. I found 95% of the monologue and animation to be frighteningly true, which means Mr. Salsberg has been thinking (a bit too) long and hard about public restrooms.
A Nice Standupish Comedy Piece
It goes without saying that the jokes and the insights are more than superb, however, the execution of such a routine as a flash cartoon (while maintaining the comedic effect of a toonless routine) can be a difficult task. It is the truly great flash artists who can interpret such things and give them a new life that they wouldn't have ever been able to attain had they been left unanimated. Of course some of the monolouge contains jokes dependent on the visuals for any comedy to surmise, but when watching this you get the feel that somehow the director did not even consider pushing any boundaries, and only did the bare minimum stylistically. Not that this is a bad thing, it is good for a director or creator of a flash toon to know his or her limits. And A Men's Room Monologue apparently loses none of it's comedic impact in a flash toon form. But it undoubtedly doesn't gain much either. The creator is clearly a talented comedian who has yet to fully realize his flash or toon directorial skills. If he is reading this I mean not to be discouraging but inspirational. I look forward to your next work.
yeah
the british public lavs are simmalar to that of the american ones but they dont have the gap or the bad locks altho occasionally u get little turds on the floor (only in asda or tesco rofl)
all things considered it was preety good
True but there is one thing
The crowders stand next to you because they're gay