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Good concept, but the jokes didn't get to me. It reminded me of the short stand-up rants the Comedy Central used to do, Shorts by Shotries or something. 3 is rewarded.
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Good concept, but the jokes didn't get to me. It reminded me of the short stand-up rants the Comedy Central used to do, Shorts by Shotries or something. 3 is rewarded.
Well done.
Nicely written. The montage scenes do go well with the monologue and some of the subtle reactions are spot on for the style.
Though maybe I've just seen a lot of comedians talking about public toilets to find any of the jokes glaringly funny.
It made me chuckle a few times and I hope you're not offended... it's not too original.
Lol
Wow, you did this when you were a freshman? Lol this is some funny stuff. I get about 70% of what you stated here, and you're right, those airblowers are a true pain in the assets.
very good
its pretty good, you should make more
Okay...
Ehhh....Its Alright I Guess.