That's good, there
Well written out monologue, good topics, good organization. Well done.
Reviews for "A Men's Room Monologue"
Funny Monologue!
The animation was ok. But, the monologue was pretty funny!
Well observed but delivery could be a bit better.
some selected aspects
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++++ Speech is all clear and good quality.
--- The delivery of the jokes is a bit flat. I'd have liked you to be a bit more expressive; slightly more over-the-top.
-- Lines were a bit wobbly. I think ideally, I'd have liked to see sharp crisp vectors here.
++++ Observational humour was well observed and of a decent standard. I actually only laughed once - at the end - but it had me smiling through most of it.
overall
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Some great observational humour delivered in an amusing flash.
who actually sits in the stalls?
I seriously can't understand how people can sit down on the toilets in the stalls. It's disgusting. Who knows who might've pissed on the ring, or what disgusting sweaty man ass has been on it before you?! At least lay some toiletpaper out or sort of squat without contact (which might be difficult if ur a fat bastard or don't have any muscles in ur legs).
I'd like to know who actually sits down on those rings and if they have any sort of concern about their hygiene and health.
So True
This Made Me Laugh Like Hell Its Funny Because Its So True It Never Gets Old And Keep Up The Good Work