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Reviews for "A Men's Room Monologue"

public shitters

this movie got one thing right. there are too many different kinds of people to annoy you in the shitters... AND THEY ALL SUCK!!!!!!!

A Very pointious humorous flick

This was done well, no i'm no talking about the graphics... Im talking about the humor, Ha! hu- ler- i- ous. it also makes a good point

Heh

This was actually pretty funny. I expected something entirely stupid but it ended up being pretty amusing. Well done.

Kick ass!

This is a very well made toon. The graphics may have sucked but its still a good clip.

Oh so true, but a little bit dull.

I enjoyed this flick, but it was a tad on the dull side. Everything was true (and oh how true) but could use a bit more... oomph... not sure quite how to put it.

One thing I did notice which was quite off-putting was the constant stop/start of the sound, which was greatly accentuated by the noisy whiny computer fans in the background. Believe me, I understand that this is low-budget, so low-tech, but here's a couple of pointers:\

1) Try recoding the sound away from the computer if possible (in a seperate room if at all possible)

2) Use more sounds and music to fill the gaps. Maybe add a background noise track (flushing, mumbling, muffled restaurant noise, etc) or add a catchy and amusing background tune (lift music or some cheesy slap bass may be appropriate).

Anyway, keep up the good work. A nice, light-hearted look at the problems men face every day in public restrooms.