Watched It 100 Times
ive watched this atleast 100 times and its still great.. :) you did i great job.. the funniest part is the old guy blowing threw the straw and he just smacks him lol
Reviews for "A Men's Room Monologue"
Not bad at all
I am interested at the topic of your selection; bathroom selections aren't that common on Newgrounds.
The animations were very nicely done, and the sounds were at the appropriate places.
However, you forgot about one important thing: the smell. Most public bathrooms smell horrible. Also, you could add some more emotion into the narrator's voice. It was mostly spoken with one tone, no strong feelings or emphasizing.
good
nice one this one is so true. i really do hate the push tapes they piss me off. i thoguht this one tho was really funny aswell nice one
Haha
The funny about all that is it's true!
funny, but needs polish
ur voice came through and relativly undistorted "whew", and u do really tell things how they are, 1/2 ply tissue paper, so on
but i didn't see any real originality, everbody at some point or another complains about public bathrooms, u recycled the same old jokes into 1 big collection, i can honestly say i've heard similar jokes on every aspect of the film, some new humor would of made this much better
i would like to give u credit on ur presentation on the jokes though, i can tell ur probly (kinda) funny in real life