Not bad, could be faster and shorter, though
Action seemed to slow up at times, leading to some parts that probably could've been cut. Overall, the animation has a certain charm to it though it's not too detailed or smooth.
Keep up the good work!
Reviews for "Ramen Flash"
Stylish, But Poor Graphics
The music went with the action wonderfully, the idea behind the animation seemed cute, fresh, and original, and you pulled it off generally pretty well. Unfortunately, I really had to dock you on graphics. The graphics looked far too simplistic, with little detailling or work with light and shading. Instead you relied on gradients and basic colors, which reduced the quality of your art.
Also, the animation sometimes left much desired. You animated most of the action without flaw, however you resolved to simply flipping the character images like pieces of paper a few times, and it looked pretty terrible.
Put some more effort into the little details and you'll have a much better piece.
eh
it wasnt too impressive, but, it was creative. so, overall...i liked it, it kept me entertained..
well...
Cup Noodle was spelled wrong (カップ　ヌード&#
12523; - kappu nuudoru) but other than that it was pretty good. Of course I don't know why they were fighting so much over something that can be purchased for 100 yen... maybe that's just anime style.
It was alright, but it could have been much better
Couple things to say here....
First: The animation was not to good. When the characters were not moving, or moving fairly quickly, it looked fine, but if they were walking, moving their arms, etc. the proportions would become screwy to say the least. Second, forget the use of real pictures and backgrounds for an animated movie, it just looks amateurish.
Second: The music was okay, but was a bit generic. It could fit in just about any fight sequence. Try to find music that really fits your movie. The music you used seemed like the kind which could fit in any movie.
Third: The humor and style got lower ratings for one reason. You had something awsome going, but you screwed it up and threw in so much mediocrity that it diluted the originality. I am speaking about the character of Meg. She was the same annoying, cute anime girl stereotype. Any comedic use of her was sub-par because it has been overused so much. The character of Dr. Wasabi was awesome. He was green (a huge plus). He had blades on stretchy limbs. He could summon blue ogre things. His tongue was a weapon. Continue this series, but only use the Doctor.