Nice style but needs more
Yes I'm nitpicking but honestly the shit bothers me dearly. I'm studying in Japan and I see the cups of ramen daily and what you had written on the cup itself was not cup noodle, the best I could come up with was cap nude. coppu nuudoru is cup noodle. Also, your writing of wasabi was a little dyslexic, the Sa looked reversed and your Wa was too scrunched. I was only able to read it because I knew your name was Dr. Wasabi. Real Japanese tend to get anal over this stuff, and have basically forced the precision of writing their language on me and I now press it on others.
As far as style goes, I liked the animeness of it, but didnt care for the chibi legs/arms. I'm just not a fan of the fat body parts. You spent the time to make the rest of it so detailed and fluid yet chose to just lose detail on the characters beyond the heads/faces. I did like the mix of music/sound effects, had a few songs in there that I've used on projects and didn't expect to hear.
Nice job, always room for improvement. Look forward to other works that you submit.