Nice to see another of your submissions.
It's to see your still subitting the work, but by your standards, I think this was not up to scratch. Trademark graphics and animation as well as voice over did help its consistancy but the overall plot and lack of originality, e.g. the style of story we all know and love from Salad Fingers and the post submitted flashes, did somewhat let it down. In my view, stick to what your really good at, it's what we love. ;)