Gets me in all the right places
As another reviewer said, you will have problems with the mainstream because you don't have a 'thumpin' techno soundtrack' and 'omg roxX0r3z violence skillz!', but personally I thought it WAS original, well thought out, very satyrical of its genre, and true to life. In fact, as I write this, I'm avoiding an English assignment, so you've created a bit of a timeloop. Well done on all counts.