Too much swearing, too little originality
I like the style, reminds me a bit of Trigun.
The jokes in relation to Zelda are worth a laugh, but the jokes that are not in relation to the Zelda franchise just seem lame. There are plenty of spots for good jokes.
The only real complaint I have is Navi's language, it doesn't bother me at all, I just think that the seriousness of swearing takes away from the humor... I know you would probably kill me if I said it... but I'll say it anyway:
Look at Legendary Frog's stuff... Little swearing, but worth more than gold. You can be right up there Granfaloon.