Gooah!
I have a tendency to dislike your work on account of predictability, cliches, etc.
However, this series is not so bad. The first one was okay, not too special, but this one I enjoyed.
It had plenty of jokes, was moderately creative, well paced, and overall was pretty good.
The only things I found bad, was the scene outside the bar (wasn't too funny, and didn't add much. Was mostly just awkward.), the "navi-gate" scene (again, lacked humor and didn't add much), and the fact that the actress of navi has crappy sound on it. Get a better microphone for her.