Pacing, man! Pacing!
Your ideas were solid, and the humor was there... but the pace was lacking. If a comedy doesn't have a good swift and steady pace... you might as well toss the whole thing out the window.
Maybe if you feel like it, you could go back and do some tighter editing. If this story just moved a little quicker, it would be totally awesome!
Cheers
DW
just like the last
this was freking funny funnyer than the last but there still halarieos ive seen uve improved in humor and the graphics and bout my last reveif in the 1st 1 i meant i beat 2 zelda games in gbasp (game boy advansed sp) and this is what is going to ispire me 2 do a tru link flash (when i get a movie maker) please respond to this!!!
p.s i love the japinese touch on both of them
Nice Job ^^
Wow that was one of the greatest things ive ever seen... nice job and cant wait to see another one if ur gonna make one ^_^
Good stuff
Navi and Talon sound the same, its confusing.
Good stuff otherwise.
wow...
Please continue this, that was mighty fuckin awesome doggie!