Really nice, some recomendation and ideas for u
I loved this, but it could be better: Give better mircrophones, give some more light and shadow touchs, put a scene searcher (so that u muss not see the whole video for seeing your favorite scene, or search for missing parts).
YOU ARE GREAT!!! So great, that u should have a bigger team, make many videos, and make a web-site, but, please: MAKE IT FREE!! ;).
I really love your characters, make more of them, because your art style is really, really GREAT!.