how about....
...better music, and a preloader for us 56k and lower people.
Reviews for "Internet Love?"
You have good art skills but put it to better use
A love story, FUCK THAT! I go on this site to get away from shit like that. You can do way better you have the skill unlike some of these fools, so do better next time, something funny and if you need a writer email me.
not bad!
Hey, I'm just checken out your animations cause I read a review on a movie you viewed! You sound a lot like me and your an animator on newgrounds like me as well... hehe in your review you made I agree with everything you said... anywayz that aside, this was a fair flash I say fair because it was your first.... the drawings were very well done... animation on the other hand needed improvement but hey it's your first!! :) The story line was mmmmm don't know reallly... it was fair I geuss to say the least!?!? The music you chose for the animation got a little anoying but it was not bad... You have an eerie way of drawing things, you should think about submitt somthing on the scarier side... mabye you have I haven't checked out your other animations yet, but I will I intend to review em all...
Most net relationships end when the love dies
That is what I think anyway. But yeah, there are a lot of crazy people out there.
Good first try.
Solid art and the animation gets the story across well, but it seems to just kinda go on for a bit then unceremoniously stop; it could benefit from an actual ending. Still, pretty good for a first try.