I didn't like it but I still gave you a four
I didn't like it but other people love this stuff, and just because it's an art of flash I don't like doesn't mean I can give you crappy marks. So, even though I'm disagreeing with my positive self, good job! Keep it up, because most people other than me like this stuff. Also, you're plot looks like that of a real anime- one of the ones that girls watch, but you could prolly do well if you ever tried outside of the net.