This was great!
Ok, First off, I really liked it. I thought the idea was really good.
Second off, (this is directed at "Mista_Shizzle") I understand that some people have different opinions of submissions, but you don't have to be such an ass about it. If you didn't like it, then just say you didn't like it and leave it at that. Just remember that if you act that way towards people, then they will act that way towards you.