Great but try and improve!
Here is my review from your first There she is!!:
"It is obvious that you have alot of skill as your graphics are amazing but you could improve your movie by improving your plot.
I loved the music you picked as it fits perfectly and you created an excelent movie."
I feel the same way about this movie. The plot was slightly better but it still could be better. But hey, you have the #2 movie on the portal so congrats!