make it betta
You shouldnt rip a perfectly good song off like that, u did moderatly well with the sounds geting that all, but the lyrics were just crap and anoying. everything repeated itself, everything repeated itself, everything repeated itself, everything repeated itself....
get the point it can get anoying like hell
and when doing a guitar solo and the notes get higher u go down the guitar not up..
all u need to do for this is make more lryics and it could get better, it had alot of potential, but u didnt do it right also
u need to make sure that it all comes together properly, lastly no offence but make sure u speak clearly cause i couldnt understand the last words he was repeating