pretty funny
it couldve been better. you should put more thought in your storylines
pretty funny
it couldve been better. you should put more thought in your storylines
Not bad for your first attempt
I like this one, its got style, and comedy. It is, however, a bit short....make another installment with about 3 times the length and better story, possibly some stuff you drew yourself(unless it sucks) and youll be on your way to stardom. In my opinion, a good flash should be lengthy and well done overall, Final Fantasy A+ is a perfect example of what i think is a 6/5. I look forward to your future submissions.
Good!
You SO need to make a flash game of this.
ok now this is ok BUT
you should try to use a new method... sprites are getting old.... but with that being said.... your story seems a little bland... a little bit like one of the mario ones in the *yay i get to do it with the princess* way .... been there done that... i recomend a new story... so far its had been good though and at 10 yo he want to do zelda???? i would think he want to go play in a sandbox with his tonka trucks... meh i might be wrong still i will look into your future flashes keep up the work and i hope to see some amplified quality in said future
not bad for your first
It was pretty good the story is interesting and has posibiltys the video quilty needs work but other than that it was good.