Interesting, but lackluster voice acting...
Forgive me. Your graphics are excellent. Keep up the great art. The acting and writing of the dialogue, though... It just doesn't seem natural. If someone saw a white rabbit that looked like that, they wouldn't say, "How curious" with that sort of tone. And "I hear it's a nice place to visit before you die" is rather cheesy. People just don't talk like that. Try to make it more natural and you're set.
Melony's Midriff
This has a good, simple style, which I prefer to over-indulged, messy pieces that take themselves too seriously - and seem to get the high ratings. I'd like to see the white bunny laugh at himself a bit (after all, he must feel overused), and perhaps draw the story in a bit. I get the feeling you're going to make it a long one.
very interesting
odd drawing style, decent animation, poor sound quality, bizzare backgrounds however drawn well, and very bizzare story.
overall interesting. but just... very... odd...
here's the skinny
i think this chick is in a comma or something like that. idk though because this is the only freakin ep.
ups and downs
the animation is very good but trying to make clever lines like, "How curious..." when you see an evil talking rabbit makes me hate the script. Who says that? If it were me I'd say, "what the fuck are you supposed to be???" Be more realistic with the lines like when Melody said, "o-kaayyyy..." when the dude said he loved her.