This is kickass Splenda to a bunch of Sugar.
Eww a spider just crawled across my monitor. Thats kind of gross. Anyways. I liked this alot. I liked the visual graphics and all those sugar-free awesomes. But sir, I dont like the fact that everybody is ripping up Mister Carrols works so many time. Come on, is making up your own nonsense so hard these days?
Please, for the love of me and my children, keep the series going. You had some amazing things present. I am just not fond of you reusing Alice in Wonderland related themes, but oh well. Nobody is original these days, even the greatest artists cant make anything new when its been done by someone else. Dont feel bad its not your fault, its societies.
But some helpful critique perhaps?
The animation was excellent, all worthwhile, except during one scene, it looked very unnatural and it didnt flow to well. Dont get me wrong, this thing is damn near perfect. And its entertainment value is through the roof with this fanbase, but on the part where she is walking through something, like under a bridge or overpass (i couldnt tell), you could have made the animation a tad smoother by putting one more keyframe in between the blank ones. But oh fucking well, its awesome. Excellent dialogue, too, I might say. I might even go so far as to say kickass idea.
But we already discussed that nonsense.
