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Reviews for "Merry Melony ep.1"

Hmm...

Pretty good!

wow

i really liked this! cant wait for episode 2...

uhhhmmm the voices were really soft...

Not bad

You know, some people just take the numbering review system way too literally.

This was a good film. However, vast improvements can still be made for part 2 (any beyond.) Your animations are quite nice. I like the tone you set with the colors of the backgrounds and the mysterious obscurities with the landscape that took me a second time to watch to notice (what she's sitting on, the house/bridge she walks past...etc)

Speaking of her walking, that tween looks awful. She mysteriously fades into the wall...so unless you're trying to foreshadow that she's a moonwalking ghost, then I'd have to assume you just couldn't get it to work right: not an aspect of being #1. Your style of mixing FBF and tweens was so good up until that moment.

The music and sound effects are quite nice, keep up that creepiness. However, the "twisted Alice in Wonderland" theme has been done many-a-times before, even as it's own game (Alice). So I hope you make this damn good/original.

On it's own, definately not the best I've seen in NG. In fact, this has high potential of becoming another one of those crappy "film noir"-esque flashes done by college students with no conclusion and not even a clear foothold of when the watcher is supposed to fill in his/her own story/plot/explanations. Hope you don't take that route.

High potential of also becoming one of the greatest stories here as well, but your expectations are monstrously high.

Good stories = Good flash

I read a bad review for this before i watched it, and that review was totally wrong. This was a great flash that can become a great series. Its all about the story, and self respecting video game freak can tell you that, and that proves true in this flash also.

Dont get me wrong, the animation was awesome too. One of my favorite parts was with the siren, it kinda made me think back to the days of silent hill.

anyway this flash was awesome and i cant wait for more.

Loving it so far. . .

I'm definitely going to have to catch the rest of this series. You probably could have revealed a little more of the story to sate the masses but pretty cool nonetheless. The pacing seemed bang on to me, and no obvious omissions or problems seem to stand out. Good job, and I'm looking forward to the next one.