Simply put: WOW!
I'm a big fan of Mall Monkeys. And seeing this come from the creator of a completely different type of writing just... WOW! I guess I just kind of pictured you as a strictly funny man with razor sharp wit, but this seems to give me a deeper look into you. I love this sumbission. Great art and style, sound seemed a bit quiet at times, but still easily audible. Keep up the good work, and I cant wait for episode 2!