Wow, indeed!
The artistic style was great, the voice-acting quality was top-notch, and your use of colors fit the story perfectly. I'm definitely waiting for the rest of the series. 5/5 10/10! Favoriting this one right now.
Reviews for "Merry Melony ep.1"
Suspensful
that was great running to the second
Merry Melony is an INSTANT Cuh-lassic!
Your artwork is phe-freakin'-NOMenal, Duhreetoh------>
Although I wasn't even aware my heart wasn't FULLy in your hands until I saw the White Rabbit. It was THEN that I knew you would be a new favorite of mine. I truly CANNOT wait for another. Your links are broken. That makes me sad. Your drawings are lovely in your gallery, but that's not Merry Melony. Wah.
............Take care, be good and fix your links, puh-lease.period
Interesting! Wish I could see more!
The animation was awesome and this makes me want to watch the rest of the series (if there was a rest) to find out just what the hell is happening here! I really like your style-- The way at first glance everything appears to be in order, but then you start to notice things here and there that are odd or out of place.
I hate when reviewers like someone below have illogical reasons for disliking great submissions or simply don't put any actual brain power into what they're saying. I don't know what was meant by "be more realistic with the lines" when it's clear there is nothing "realistic" about the world shown (parts of cars sticking out from earth and buildings, tendrils of clouds poking out from buildings, an enormous chunk of earth running through a house, a town completely devoid of life, a TALKING PSYCHO BUNNY?). If anything, one would think the world is within a dream, and we all know dreams can be very fanciful. As far as I see it, the dialogue fits fine once you consider the content of the movie, and it's kind of established that the girl, for lack of a better choice of words, isn't easily surprised (based on her apparent lack of worry when she got a frantic phone call from someone that seemed to be close to her), so it would make sense for her NOT to be alarmed by a random rabbit man, especially since he alludes to her having met him in the past.
Tl;dr: Awsm! Moar plz.
....Well damn
Hot damn this is interesting to say the least.
Sound: Music is great, the voices...eh....about 99% of the time are phenomenal. There's one spot when she hangs up the phone and says "Ok I love you too.", it's really hard to hear. At least compared to the rest of it.
Animation: The art work is fantastic. I'd hate to live in some of those homes if a bright literally runs through it. Very strange world with very strange happenings. You're facial expressions are evident and nice, and I love this style of motion. Not as smooth going from one position to another which to me makes it look more real. There's only one place that I just noticed odd/off. When she's just walking around and she walks under that bridge with her face on it...her walk seems really off. Her right foot seems to only go out to her side and she looks like she's walking on rollers because her feet are sliding across the ground. I could be nit picking now but it is the only thing I found wrong in this.
Overall: This is an extremely well put together flash. I wish there were more episodes because even though this one didn't full out explain everything you ingeniously told us so little but in a way that told up so much and we want more. Bravo on that and I really want to see more, also very impressive flash for being five years old. It still stands over many today.