Superior flash.
First off let me start off by saying congratulations. I really like how you made a solid serious flash. The graphics, were exeptional, they were really detailed, like a comic strip in a way. The sound was pretty mysterious since it played with the flash.
However I thought your story line foreshadowed, and gave a way the story line without much cover up.
DO NOT READ BELLOW OR IT WILL RUIN THE STORY IF YOU HAVENT FIGURED IT OUT.
Yea i know Melony had an accident, and she is in a weird coma/lost in her mind. Her husband in her cell phone was really talking to her from the hospital. And when she passed out, what had actually happened was that they cut her life support.
I know you tried real hard dude i'll give you that, but I though the story line was a lil easy to predict. Anyway good luck, with your flash it was good in all the other areas.
If you want to make your story better, I suggest that you add a little shadowing, and less give aways like the phone call, or dont put the end of the phone call in it kinda gave it away. All in all it was great Flash is hard, but you made it seem Easy. GOOD JOB YOU GET A 5 FROM ME