sweet
yeah don't listen to that guy about the animation. The animation is very smooth and good for your type of cartoon, being that all the characters are hand drawn and must be converted into flash or whatever programs you use.
Can't wait for episode 2!
Interesting
You are probably one of the best drawers on Newgrounds, yet I would have to say a very bad animator. Yes drawing is very good, but the movements of the people and walking and moving was all to jumpy and gross. Very good plot though. Don't see that a whole lot.
Oh yeah, and don't make a movie into different parts. The movie was only a minute long before a "to be continued" sign came up. Atleest end the video off at a reasonable point in the story.
Good start...
Good start, but that's all it is... half of a flash. Yeah, you can draw well, but so can lots of people.
that was awesome
please make make more
When do we see the next episode?
In your comments you mentioned that this is episode one of a ten-part series. It's been a long time and no episode two yet! Your graphics, sound, style, and technique are amazing. Don't let Melony or your fans down... Please! I would love to see the next episode.