Very, very nice
Excellent style. Very nice job setting the mood. Sufficiently creepy talking death-rabbit. I liked it lot.
Could definitely have been longer. The rings around her eyes made her look strung-out, and I don't think that that's the look you were going for. I don't know, just a comment.
Also, since the link is broken, here is his new site: webspace.ringling.edu/~edrobil e/