Holy Shiznit!
I'm not good enough to find a flaw, really. You've pretty much pushed the Flash medium as far as it can go. I really like how stylish and origninal it is. It's also just the right amount of creepy. It's unsettling, but not horrifically disturbing like some I could mention that have made the front page. I think there may be something to the dream/coma thing, and if it's true, the plot twist is given away too easily. Even so, I wouldn't have picked it up on my own, and it doesn't take away from the great quality of this short. Some people whine about "not enough story" or "WTF, OMG, WTF?" Well, you'alls can just go back to your video game parodies and potty jokes, cause this is a seriously inovative and well crafted peice of art. Yes, art, you badasses. Looking forward to seeing more of your work.