Nice, but not frontpage worthy IMO
Interesting Flash ya got there.
But its not exactly my style of art, or just my style period...sorry but im not a big fan...though i have to concede two points:
1. I like the usage of sounds. The sirens and fuzzing at the end add to the movie IMO
2. If you watch this at night, in the dark, with no lights on, you actually kinda get spooked...i thought you conveyed the moods well.
Still, not my kinda flash, so 6 here, but since its a quality flash, i have to give you a 5/5 for the rating.
Btw, for those who mentioned how Melony may be in a coma, besides Elliots "phone call", and the cars in the building, i found two more things to suggest this:
In the beggining, Melony looks up to see a bird fly into the sun...the sun may actually be the light surgeons use during operations. Second, notice that nothing except Melony, the rabbit, and the aforementioned bird move (ie, the smoke). During a coma, the mind sort of stays "frozen in time"...this may be a symbolic representation of that.