GASP!
I LOVED IT! *dances* I loved it hwen she died. Lemme guess. Mr. Bunny is her last pet and she didn't feed it and it DIED!... OR.. maybe not.
Reviews for "Merry Melony ep.1"
Interesting, but lackluster voice acting...
Forgive me. Your graphics are excellent. Keep up the great art. The acting and writing of the dialogue, though... It just doesn't seem natural. If someone saw a white rabbit that looked like that, they wouldn't say, "How curious" with that sort of tone. And "I hear it's a nice place to visit before you die" is rather cheesy. People just don't talk like that. Try to make it more natural and you're set.
A pretty good start to a series
The art work in this project of yours is outstanding. Bridges built into houses, cars are trapped in a road that was built all around them and Melony is there walking as though she's been there for years. All this tells me that your knowledge of drawing and script writing, in terms of setting and atmosphere, are solid.
Anyone can tell that you've based this new world of yours on the world of today. There are houses, buildings and at least 2 people left on the planet. I hope you'll explain the the audience more into how talking rabbits and everything else came to be on this planet. Maybe even tell us who built the bridge that goes through the house or who Melony's boyfriend is. In which case I look forwards to your second installment of this series :).
The only small qualm I have is that Melony has a working cellphone. This suggests that someone in this work has an transmitter and a computer network setup to operate it. If this is so, then how are there no other people in the city to run or maintain such an infrastructure?
Good luck on your next episode.
Very Interesting, BEAUTIFUL ARTWORK
SOMEBODY watched Donnie Darko before making this flash. It seems like I understand what's going on in the story, but I'm not going to accidently give anything away, so I'll just have to wait to see if I was right or not. But, anyways, this flash was fantastic. The style of artwork was rather original. You just don't see to much real TALENT here on Newgrounds anymore, save a few artists (you know who you are). I'm anxiously awaiting the next installment. Great job, and please make the next one just as entertaining.
One very interesting animation
Some people have said that this movie is boring, but the art style keeps you hooked, and even though there isn't any -real- plot for the time being, I'm looking forward to the next episode for some relevations. Oh, and for those of you who like gritty and dirty artwork that looks like something from a crude grafitti...the art style gives the animation a very dark tone...and I hope the story is even darker.