Reviews for Sweet Mother of Vartan

[Quietmessenger144]

Over all, well done.

You didn't do too badly; however, a good animation is only as good as it's weakest link, that being your audio. You need a foam over your microphone, or consider buying a good one (they range from 25-1000 dollars US, then you get into the professional stuff), it's very important to match the sound quality, or else your viewers will have trouble understanding what they're saying if you have guys who like to boost the bass to the point where all they here is "PPPFFFF, KBFFFFF, AAAAHHHBFFFFT". For future reference, that's the only think you really need to think of. (Another suggestion is to just hold the mic farther back, but you lose volume.)

Otherwise, excellent work. Keep it up!

[Morlonic]

A fantastic display of animation skill.

You animate as well as a Disney production. I've never seen a Newgrounds cartoon animated as solidly and coherently as this.
The facial expressions were clear and very comical.

You could tell that the sound wasn't crisp, but you forgive and forget it because of the animation quality.

The plot wasn't as impressive, I'm afraid. The boxer somehow managed to take out that human glob of meat with one single punch, all because of a crack about his mama? It maybe could have worked if the anger possessed the small boxer, like a demon sort of thing- then you'd a good oppurtunity for an ultra-spectacular animation display. Whether or not that is a good idea, I guess what I'm trying to say is the ending was a tad anticlimactic.

But boy the animation was tops.

[asdfrasdfg]

Good movie.

Reason for the 6 on sound is...well the sound was of pretty poor quality, and I found myself just kind of tuning it out occasionally. The graphics are simply amazing though, as well as the style. Do more, but with better sound.

[KiLLAZ-ME]

Good!!

That was good flash keep it up hope to see more!!!!!!

[BlueSteel24]

great animation......

as already stated, your animation is great, but you're weakness is humor, as that's what you were going for. i gave a 5 just for the great animation and audio, but....the humor was definately lacking.
well .... not saying you should go the played out momma jumps in and clobbers the thug route, but......just making the fight longer after the momma insult...maybe have vartan go nuts and knock out the ref, then give the 2 ton terror a low blow (theres two opportunities for comedy) followed by an uppercut.
don't get me wrong, you got great style...i liked the slowdown for the hit
and great skill....i could never get myself to this level
you're only drawback is the comedy

on a side note..i checked out your site. it proves more than your animation does. amazing skill.......but, sorry i cant really put this as nicely as i'd like....lacking scripts. the level of animation in this flash got me to look and your site is a more extreme version of this flash. the demo reel was very impressive.
your only downfall is the script. now, if you collaborate (which happens often here) with someone who writes good comedy you both get a winner. or just put more effort into the script yourself.
if you need ideas just look at the all time list. super flash bros are always a hit for comedy or you could do a more serious skit with your skill and still rank high.

summing up....don't take this the wrong way, but concentrate on humor or seriousness or action in each flash. you have tons of potential. :)